One day, a grandfather decided to go on a fishing trip with his grandson's Tom. In the afternoon before sunset, they took a small wood boat. Before they left, the grandfather saw Tom's dog running fast. After that, they took it with them. When they were in the river, the grandfather threw his line in the water. He wore a brown hat with his glasses on it. Also, he wore dark, green trousers and a green shirt. He had wrinkles on his face and his hands. Tom's dog was brown and white. It tried to catch it's reflection in the water. However the grandfather was a smoker. Tom kept going when his grandfather tried to catch a fish. Tom wore a green shirt like his grandfather. Tom sat in front his grandfather and his dog. The dog sat beside Tom's grandfather. On the back of the boat, there was a small ring made of metal. So the grandfather and the dog sat on the back of the boat because several waves made the boat rock. Although, the water seems like a yellow because the sunset reflected the light in the water. Finally, they returned to their home before the night.
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